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15 January 2008 @ 08:36 pm
Down We Fall (DG/Cain fic)  
Here we go again... I couldn't help it! I tried to ignore them, but then the little plot bunnies started chewing away at the nerve endings in my brain. I need my hand-eye coordination!  ^_^  So I wrote this to appease them. I hope you all like. Another look at DG from a Cain-centric point of view.

Title: Down We Fall
Show: Tin Man
Pairing: slight DG/Cain
Warning: Spoilers for Part II, just arrived in Finaqua
Summary: What was Cain doing when DG was forced to carry on alone?
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these fantastic characters that I use for writing practice.
Word Count: 1080
Posted at: [info]tinman_fic



            There were two things that Wyatt Cain hated. One was being told what to do. The other was going against his gut instinct.

            He’d just been forced to do both.

            Trying to keep his mind occupied, he began to pace. Stillness had never quite taken with him since he’d become a tin man, and he hoped the constant movement would curb his edginess. Unfortunately it did nothing, and his gaze constantly went back to the path where she’d gone off on her own. 

            He’d stepped to follow her, and the Headcase too. But the Shapeshifter had spoken up. Said to let her do it alone. While Glitch had since stopped and was now seated with Raw on the swing that DG had occupied, Cain was having trouble staying still. He wanted to go with her. He’d come this far, been with her every step of the way. Why should he be told he couldn’t go now?

            Wyatt Cain never took well to being told what to do. He wasn’t about to start now.

            He started down the path. As expected, there were noises of objection.

            “Cain—”

            “Mister Cain—”

            Cain turned, gritting his teeth. Who was going to challenge him? Glitch had gotten up and Tutor had taken a step towards him.

            “She needs to do this on her own.”

            “No offense pooch,” Cain said, “But that ain’t gonna happen.”

            “But she needs to—”

            “What she needs,” Cain interrupted, “is not your problem. She’s not that kid that you taught magic tricks to anymore.”

            “You’re right,” said the Shapeshifter. Cain stopped. Before he could speak, he noticed Tutor’s eyes flicker before he added, “She’s not a kid.”

            Cain stopped. Had he said that? Yes, he had. There was something to that.

She wasn’t a kid. She wasn’t a child, didn’t need them babysitting her, holding her hand every step of the way. He’d give the dog points for that.

But as he stood there considering the dog’s words, that feeling came back. That uneasiness. He’d felt it when he was running towards the cabin, towards his family. That tiny sense of dread. That feeling that comes from an awkward silence, from shouting without getting a response. He couldn’t shake it. When he’d reached the cabin, that feeling had been right.

He wasn’t about to let that happen again. He’d already lost two people he cared about today. He wasn’t going to stand by and chance that there could be a third.

And it’d take a lot more than an old magician to stop him.

            He looked at Glitch and Raw. He could see it in their eyes. They wanted to go after her too. Cain had looked to them after DG had claimed to hear something, and they’d both looked back at him as concerned as Cain was.

            He glanced down the path that had carried DG away from them. He’d protect her, no matter what. But he damn well couldn’t do it from here.

            He’d made up his mind.

            Cain turned to look at Tutor, casting a glance at Glitch and Raw, who were both now standing with expectation. The Shapeshifter seemed to shrink a little under Wyatt Cain’s patented stare. Without another word, Wyatt Cain turned on his heel and began treading the same path that DG had taken with a little more speed to make up for lost time. He wasn’t surprised when he heard the familiar sound of steps fall in behind him like they had for most of the week.

            He’d only walked a couple of yards when he heard a scream. His heart stopped.

            DG.

            He ran. Blindly at first, excited like he’d been running through the trees to get to his son and wife. As he reached a sort of valley full of fallen trees, he forced himself to slow his breathing. If DG was in trouble, he’d have to keep cool.

            He stopped to listen carefully to hear something, a sound, something that would tell him where she was. Suddenly, he heard it. But it was just as Glitch reached him.

            “Cain, where—”

            “Shh!” Cain spun around and held a stern hand up. The advisor stopped instantly and signaled to Raw over his shoulder to be quiet as he approached.

            Cain listened again. There it was. It was faint, but definitely there.

            Crying. Someone talking.

            Cain slid carefully down the hill, over and under stumps until he spotted a cave-like opening towards one end of the valley. Focusing, he moved fluidly through the wreckage of trees, rocks, and dead grass until he reached the opening.

            He found her at the entrance of a gaping hole. She didn’t turn at the sound of him behind her. He analyzed what he was seeing quickly. She wasn’t in any danger that he could see, wasn’t being attacked. No doubt whatever she’d uncovered had sparked memories that were causing her pain.

For a brief moment, he wished that they’d never come across Tutor. He was helping her to recover her memories. If this was what the memories were causing, he wished she’d never unlocked them. He only wished it for a moment though. He knew she was the big savior of the OZ, the one to lead them out of darkness. There was a bigger picture. Bigger than her.

But he’d give anything for it to be someone else.

He didn’t move as the rest of the band caught up, Tutor too. They all stood there unmoving, trying to make out her words between her tears.

“… All the terrible things that have happened… They were all my fault… I should never have let go…”

Cain’s heart pinched. He took a step forward, shrugging off Tutor’s sudden grip on his arm as he moved. She didn’t look up as he approached her. She was on bended knee, leaning on her upright knee for balance. He swallowed and saw himself doing the same at Adora’s grave.

Reaching out, he placed a hand on her shoulder. When she’d done it to him, he’d looked away, not wanting her to see his tears, to see him weak. Her reaction was no different. As soon as his hand came in contact with her shoulder and gripped it gently, she dropped her head, hiding her face with her hair. Neither said anything.

He’d felt her comfort, her presence, through that simple motion while he suffered through his sudden loss.

He hoped, for her, he was doing the same.

 
 
Motivation for the scene: giddygiddy
Background music: Desperado - The Eagles
 
 
( 52 scenes filmed — Quiet on the Set! )
Nobody Expects the Spanish Inquisition: [umi_mizuno] kyon[info]crumpeteer on January 16th, 2008 02:08 am (UTC)
Your Tin Man icons are ten kinds of good. Just had to mention that.
atellix: Haruhi Suzumiya - I'm with crazy[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:18 am (UTC)
LOL, thanks much! I love your icon too! Haruhi Suzumiya is awesome. Can't wait for the second season!
Allronix1[info]allronix1 on January 16th, 2008 02:08 am (UTC)
And again, you ace it. GREAT bit about the parallels between the cave and Adora's grave.
atellix: Writing - typewriter[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:19 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I know how much you love The Wizard of Oz, and your encouragement means a lot. Thank you for reading it! ^_^ Glad it was good.
N.E. Star: Dorthey Tin Man[info]n_e_star on January 16th, 2008 02:22 am (UTC)
Very cool way to do Cain's POV for this moment.
atellix: Tin Man - Wyatt 'bad attitude'[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:20 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
transgenic_girl[info]transgenic_girl on January 16th, 2008 02:31 am (UTC)
Made. Of. Awesome.
atellix: Tin Man - The Gunslinger[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:20 am (UTC)
So.Are.You... for reading and commenting! *hugs*
scoob2222[info]scoob2222 on January 16th, 2008 02:40 am (UTC)
very nice!
atellix: Tin Man - Wyatt 'bad attitude'[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:21 am (UTC)
Thank you very much!
The Evil Twin[info]bets_cyn on January 16th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Okay.
1: I love that your journal is all psych-ed out! I love that show!

2: This is so sweet! :-)
atellix: Psych - ShawnGus grin[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:22 am (UTC)
1- Psych is seven kinds of awesome. It is without a doubt my favorite show of all time. I'm so glad that other people love it too! ^_^ Us Psych fans need to stick together.

2- Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I'm really glad you liked it.

Thanks again!
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 Nayeli Honizre[info]willow_fae_20 on January 16th, 2008 03:23 am (UTC)
This is a wonderful character piece. Loved how you juxtaposed the cabin with the cave. Great job.
atellix: Tin Man - The Group[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:24 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I was hoping I could pull it off without stumbling over my writing. Thank you for the encouragement -- it means a lot.
Trystan: Tin Man[info]trystan830 on January 16th, 2008 04:32 am (UTC)
ooooh this is a really good one. me likie. :D
atellix: Tin Man - The Gunslinger[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:24 am (UTC)
*grins* Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

*pokes you to post yours so she can read it already!*
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Lizzay: caindg[info]lizzelda on January 16th, 2008 12:33 pm (UTC)
Love the insight into Cain in this moment, you captured his kind of protective nature really nicely. His voice is spot on! Loved the simple moment of comfort.
atellix: Tin Man - The Gunslinger[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment! I'm glad his voice is good - you could do tons of describing, but if it doesn't sound like something the character would say, it seems less likely. I always focus on the dialogue first. I'm glad it worked out.

Thanks again for the kind words! *hands you a cookie*
goflo[info]goflo on January 16th, 2008 02:28 pm (UTC)
Great story. I love when author's insert the "missing time" plot. Love it. ;D
atellix: Tin Man - Wyatt 'bad attitude'[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:30 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm sort of addicted to those myself, thus the reason I wrote it. I also wondered why they were standing there when she was crying when Tutor told them not to go. Then I noticed Cain was standing the closest in front and figured that it was probably his doing.

*shakes fist at plot bunnies* Thanks so much for the wonderful comment!
Proyecto de periodista // Journalist-to-be[info]yadwhiga on January 16th, 2008 02:38 pm (UTC)
Just one word: Rawesome :)
atellix: Tin Man - The Gunslinger[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:29 am (UTC)
Four words: You rock. Thank you. *hugs you for such a wonderful comment*
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I'm a balancing force of maturity... Or not  ;): raw[info]erinm_4600 on January 16th, 2008 03:11 pm (UTC)
eep...

*flails you*

Amazing!
atellix: Tin Man - DG Cain razor[info]atellix on January 17th, 2008 05:28 am (UTC)
Aww! *glomps* Thank you! Thanks again so much for reading another piece! I'm really glad you liked it! I'm going to hunt down some of your writing tomorrow and give you wonderful feedback! Your support means a lot -- thank you!
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Bad Horse: Protector[info]gatechic on January 18th, 2008 03:09 pm (UTC)
Another great insight into Cain's character. He took on the role of protector with full force. And I love how the comforting roles were reversed.










atellix: Tin Man - Wyatt 'bad attitude'[info]atellix on January 19th, 2008 06:52 pm (UTC)
Thanks! It means a lot that you like it - I'm on the right track to figuring out the attractive enigma that is Wyatt Cain. Thanks so much for your wonderful comment! *hugs and gives you cookies*
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[info]ex_nadeshiko480 on April 1st, 2008 04:25 am (UTC)
Woah, what a fic. I'm pretty sure that if the cameras had still been rolling on that scen, it would have gone just as you described it!
Awesome job!
atellix: Tin Man - Not Han and Chewie[info]atellix on April 2nd, 2008 01:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! ^_^ And thank you for the wonderful comment. It made my day.
[info]disciplineunderfire.blogspot.com on August 13th, 2009 05:31 pm (UTC)
Every time I watch that scene at the swing and Tutor stopping Cain, my snark is "that lasts all of five minutes." But I had never thought of pairing it with Adora's grave. You are genius.
( 52 scenes filmed — Quiet on the Set! )